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2024年考研英语真题大作文（例文+分析）

2024年考研英语真题大作文（例文+分析）

2024年考研英语真题大作文（例文+分析）

Directions:

Write an essay of about 160 – 200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

(1) describe the drawing and chart briefly,

(2) interpret its intended meaning, and

(3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

情境概括：一幅图是公园里的健身区得到了小区居民的厚爱。一个图标是家门口公园数量变化，我们要分析这两幅图之间的关系，从图表中可以看出，从2020到2022年，公园数量从406增加到670，逐年升高，这给居民带来巨大的受益，居民可以就近锻炼身体，提升生活幸福感。

第一段

描述图表+图画

第二段

重点解释为什么形成此现象？这种现象在2-3线城市越来越普遍。 第一：随着生态环保宜居概念的普及，政府或公共团体越来越重视通过建设公园，打造适宜人们生活的城市。  第二，体育活动设施是公园重要组成部分，因离家近，方便年轻人，老年人等独自或组团运动，深受居民欢迎。

第三段

预测趋势，居民幸福感得以加强，建设公园对居民和社会发展有利。

参考作文地带整理范文：

One can see that the number of park has spiked up from 406 in 2020 to 670 in 2022 in chart, which naturally leads to the emergence of picture that small group of young people run pass the Fitness Area in park.Apparently, people are satisfied with the construction of parks.

可以看到，在图表中，公园的数量从2020年的406个激增到2022年的670个，这自然导致了图中出现了一群当地居民在公园里锻炼身体的现象。显然，人们对公园的建设感到满意。

So, what factors can be responsible for the above phenomenon? Residents in second, or third-tier cities are not strange to this. Firstly, the concept of livable city finds its way into life and a goal for urban development is established. Thus, government or public organizations pay more attention to building park which offers the public rest, sight-seeing,and exercise. Secondly,  fitness area, where young and old do their exercises by individuals or in groups, as a huge part of park, has gradually gained its popularity among local residents.

那么，是什么因素导致了上述现象呢？二三线城市的居民对此并不陌生。首先，宜居城市的概念融入生活，城市发展的目标也已确立。因此，政府或公共组织更重视建设公园，为公众提供休息、观光和锻炼。其次，健身区作为公园的一个重要组成部分，年轻人和老年人在这里单独或集体锻炼，慢慢在当地居民中越来越受欢迎。

Predictably, local residents’ happiness will be enhanced by a lot of benefits from park. And I am convinced that building more parks are beneficial for both individuals and society.

不出所料，当地居民的幸福感将因公园带来的诸多好处而得到提升。我坚信，建设更多的公园对个人和社会都有益。

范文

The picture shows a park filled with people engaging in various activities such as jogging, talking, and playing. A sign reading “Community Fitness Zone” suggests that the park is designed to promote healthy lifestyles. A young person in the picture is saying, “The new park built in our neighborhood is great!” indicating positive public reception.

The chart on the right illustrates the number of parks built over the past three years, with a steady increase from 406 in 2020 to 532 in 2021, and 670 in 2022. This growth demonstrates a significant effort to create more public spaces for recreation and social activities.

The intended meaning behind these visuals is to highlight the importance of building public parks to enhance community well-being. The increasing number of parks reflects a commitment to improving residents' quality of life, promoting health, and fostering community interactions.

In my opinion, the construction of more parks is essential as it encourages physical activity, reduces stress, and creates a greener urban environment. Governments and local authorities should continue to invest in such projects, as they bring both environmental and social benefits. This positive trend shows an understanding that public spaces contribute greatly to a city's livability and citizens' happiness.

Part A

Read the following email from a student. Write a reply.

Dear Li Ming

I’ve got a class assignment to make an oral report on an ancient Chinese scientist. I am not sure how to prepare for it. Could you give me some advice? Thanks for your help.

Yours, Paul

Write your letter in no less than 100 words.

Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

情境概括：Paul 向李明请求李明给自己一些关于口头报告中国科学家的课堂作业的建议, 因为自己不知道怎么准备，要求李明给Paul写一封不少于100个字的回信。不要在信的末尾签上你自己的名字。

分析：题目出法新颖，但本质就是给同学提建议，可采用非正式文体，文章中有3-5词缩略，2-3个祈使句等。

第一段：寒暄+表达提出建议

第二段：推荐一个科学家，比如鲁班；然后提出如何准备报告，第一步，引入；第二步维基百科查找信息；第三步，表达对科学家的敬重学习等

第三段：表达会成功完成这个报告，等好消息

参考范文：

Dear Paul,

I’m very pleased that you have come to seek advice on your oral report on ancient Chinese scientists from me. Below are my thoughts. Feel free to communicate with me anytime.

非常高兴你来向我寻求建议，听到你要做关于中国古代科学家的报告了，下面是我的想法，欢迎随时和我沟通。

Actually, a lot of scientists pop in my mind, however, Lu Ban, the Chinese master carpenter is the one I have to recommend. How can we do a oral report about him? Firstly, introduce the character Lu Ban from the popular mobile game King of Glory in China, which will definitely attract everyone’s interest . Secondly, describe detailed information of Lu Ban, such as his dynasty, achievements. I’m sure you can find that on Wikipedia.

我心里闪现了无数个科学家， 但是有一位，我想你也熟悉，那就是鲁班。我们可以由风靡中国的手游王者荣耀里的角色鲁班引入，我相信一开始就会吸引大家兴趣；其次，详细介绍鲁班的生活的朝代和做出的成就，这些你可以在维基百科上查到。最后，表达自己对这位科学家的敬重，这是我们当代大学生都应该学习的。(根据字数，100-110就可以了，多了不要写去掉，考场尤其注重时间和正确率，言多必失)

I believe you will successfully complete the report and I’m looking forward to your good news.

我相信你会圆满完成报告，期待你的好消息。

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

2018年考研真题范文：

http://www.liuxuepaper.com/kaoyan/816725.html

2019年考研真题范文：

http://www.liuxuepaper.com/kaoyan/816727.html

2020年考研真题范文：

http://www.liuxuepaper.com/kaoyan/816728.html

2021年考研真题及范文：

http://www.liuxuepaper.com/kaoyan/816729.html

2022年考研真题及范文：

http://www.liuxuepaper.com/kaoyan/816730.html

2023年考研真题及范文：

http://www.liuxuepaper.com/kaoyan/816731.html

2024年考研真题+范文：

http://www.liuxuepaper.com/kaoyan/816732.html

2025年考研真题+范文：

http://www.liuxuepaper.com/kaoyan/816733.html

请您参考学习。

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